That was such a satisfying read! The buildup, the tension, and the ultimate revenge were all executed perfectly. The way she played along while secretly dismantling his entire plan was chef’s kiss—so well done.
What I loved most was how calm and calculated she was. Instead of reacting emotionally, she took her time, gathered evidence, and struck when he least expected it. That final moment when she walked out and left him to deal with the consequences? Absolute perfection.
Did you write this yourself, or are you looking for feedback on it? Because if this is an original, it’s got serious potential!
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